From 14343e8e4d51695814fec67661faefb6348a3036 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Beckingham <paul@beckingham.net>
Date: Sat, 1 Oct 2011 11:49:41 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Documentation

- Improved the working in the 'edit' command template.
---
 src/commands/CmdEdit.cpp | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/commands/CmdEdit.cpp b/src/commands/CmdEdit.cpp
index 228731691..a7641ed6b 100644
--- a/src/commands/CmdEdit.cpp
+++ b/src/commands/CmdEdit.cpp
@@ -143,19 +143,19 @@ std::string CmdEdit::formatTask (Task task)
 
   if (verbose)
     before << "# The 'task edit <id>' command allows you to modify all aspects of a task\n"
-           << "# using a text editor.  What is shown below is a representation of the\n"
-           << "# task in all it's detail.  Modify what you wish, and if you save and\n"
-           << "# quit your editor, taskwarrior will read this file and try to make sense\n"
-           << "# of what changed, and apply those changes.  If you quit your editor\n"
-           << "# without saving or making any modifications, taskwarrior will do nothing.\n"
+           << "# using a text editor.  Below is a representation of all the task details.\n"
+           << "# Modify what you wish, and when you save and quit your editor, \n"
+           << "# taskwarrior will read this file, determine what changed, and apply\n"
+           << "# those changes.  If you exit your editor without saving or making\n"
+           << "# modifications, taskwarrior will do nothing.\n"
            << "#\n"
            << "# Lines that begin with # represent data you cannot change, like ID.\n"
-           << "# If you get too 'creative' with your editing, taskwarrior will dump you\n"
-           << "# back into the editor to try again.\n"
+           << "# If you get too creative with your editing, taskwarrior will send you\n"
+           << "# back to the editor to try again.\n"
            << "#\n"
-           << "# Should you find yourself in an endless Groundhog Day loop, editing and\n"
-           << "# editing the same file, just quit the editor without making any changes.\n"
-           << "# Taskwarrior will notice this and stop the editing.\n"
+           << "# Should you find yourself in an endless loop, re-editing the same file,\n"
+           << "# just quit the editor without making any changes.  Taskwarrior will \n"
+           << "# notice this and stop the editing.\n"
            << "#\n";
 
   before << "# Name               Editable details\n"